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I said I was going to do character sheets for my characters and so I did and here they are.

I should probably do some more but as far as I know I only have two characters. :Y

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Where do i start

Well, I love the idea of being so indepth. Informing of the artist(wiether it you or someone else it doesnt matter), of all this data is a great idea.
For me, this feels way to cluttered, but then again, I was taught it was ok to use multiple sheets(one for turn around, one for objects, one for faces..ect). As far as the faces go, since he is under a mask, i dont mind the naming of the expressions, but normally, you should be able to tell what expression is shown. And if it is gonna be 3 views, it normally front,side,back. 3/4ths are usually added as well. That is all i can think for now.

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this would be of better help when drawing kuroxan :thumbsup::D

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I agree with the first commentary. I like the idea of the character sheets, but it does seem little cluttered in composition of the image. Though I know most people here aren't art majors like I am ^^; Though i could be wrong. I definitely love the detailed facial expressions of how the character reacts in certain situations given to them. The writing is at good reading size I will commend that on the character sheets. Most people don't concider that when they are doing a composition piece like this.

The thing I would highly suggest though is to brake the panel into pieces though. Keep the body formats all on one image area, then brake down each individual part piece by piece on page and then do the full fledged drawings on the other! =D

Then again maybe you have method to your madness that I'm not quiet aware of with the way you do your formatting on the drawings! Lol :clap: All in all nicely done! :nod:
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thanks man Ill keep that in mind

This is mostly a reference for other people so I was just worrying mostly on some typical expression he would use. Not to concerned about the positioning of the face for reference sake because if you needed to you could just flip the image horizontally and would get the same effect, amirite?

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Great work all around. :ninja:

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:iconoriginalunoriginal:
Yea..i believe so

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:iconmayshing:
Quite detailed. It would be great to use for fanart reference or production.

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yes

yes it would

*hint hint*

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lol, I will have to make time for it if i can get done with my never ending to do list. :3

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